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  • gautami tripathy Feb 7, 2009 @ 12:08

    like the alliteration

  • Ashi Feb 8, 2009 @ 8:22

    Like this and even more when one connect your senryu dog poem, they could and do match each other.

  • devika Feb 8, 2009 @ 9:57

    Liked this, Ken

    Almost like a scene seen somewhere…

    wishes,
    devika

  • Ken Wagner Feb 8, 2009 @ 17:48

    Ashi – Yes, I think the dogs and birds would enjoy each other’s haiku!

    Devika – The scenes are – everywhere. We need only watch and wait, no?

  • Usagi Feb 24, 2009 @ 12:43

    what about the 5-7-5 syllable stanza?

  • Ken Wagner Feb 24, 2009 @ 21:21

    Good question, Usagi!

    Haiku in English does not have to follow the 5-7-5 pattern.

    There is an extensive discussion on the issue here – Forms in English Haiku discussed on OpenMicro