Rain Melts | Rain haiku poem example | 013009

Rain melts
the snow to evening ice –
We’ve slipped so far.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

7 comments… add one
  • haikuexpeditions Jan 31, 2009 @ 15:09

    slipped so far…hmmm
    i perceive a sense of sadness as well although you may not have. 😉

  • gautami tripathy Jan 31, 2009 @ 20:44

    slipped yet again
    into that precipice-
    saved by a log

  • Ken Wagner Jan 31, 2009 @ 20:53

    haikuexpeditions – Yes, the sadness.

    Gautami – To be saved – by a log? I’ll take the log.

  • Latha May 6, 2009 @ 7:19

    Slipped into a nice haiku

  • Maryam E. Rezagah Feb 11, 2010 @ 11:38

    Nice haiku, Ken

  • Tara Mar 2, 2010 @ 14:40

    Nice reflection and feeling of movement 🙂

  • jack cutler Jun 14, 2011 @ 18:36

    This isn’t really a haiku, as a haiku has 3 lines – the 1st and the 3rd lines must have 5 syllables, and the 2nd line must have 7.

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