Night Falls | Night haiku poem example | 022509

Night falls
onto black
ice.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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comradeharps Feb 26, 2009 @ 1:52
Dangerous.
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Crafty Green Poet Feb 26, 2009 @ 2:53
brilliant
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gautami tripathy Feb 26, 2009 @ 9:02
black night
gets me
black knight
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Ken Wagner Feb 26, 2009 @ 21:34
I wanted this one to descend – so to speak – naturally. I was concerned that the double meaning of “falls” might seem too forced.
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