Mussel Shells | Bay haiku poem example | 012509 Categories: Haiku Poems About The Bay Mussel shells poke from the black bay marsh. Seagulls scan. Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
mussels shells
stay buried
seagulls encircle
Good one, Ken
wishes,
devika
I’m not sure if the third line works. I was trying to convey a sense of stillness with vague hints of danger, quick action, the gnashing of a seagull’s beak.
You are the one who feels, Ken.
and the author of it…
to me it sounded fine. 🙂
wishes
devika
Thanks, Devika.