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  • gautami tripathy Jan 26, 2009 @ 10:22

    mussels shells
    stay buried
    seagulls encircle

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  • Devika Jan 26, 2009 @ 11:04

    Good one, Ken

    wishes,
    devika

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  • Ken Wagner Jan 26, 2009 @ 19:40

    I’m not sure if the third line works. I was trying to convey a sense of stillness with vague hints of danger, quick action, the gnashing of a seagull’s beak.

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  • Devika Jan 26, 2009 @ 23:38

    You are the one who feels, Ken.
    and the author of it…
    to me it sounded fine. 🙂

    wishes
    devika

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  • Ken Wagner Jan 27, 2009 @ 21:34

    Thanks, Devika.

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