Manicured | People senryu poem example | 022009 Categories: Senryu Poems About Human Nature Manicured – Can’t touch her ’til the tips are dry Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
I read “tips” as lips, and took it as being about anticipation. OK, it’s about momentary denial then. Very true.
I like this one! Witty and colloquial, but pared down and vivid enough to make it poetry.