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  • comradeharps Feb 21, 2009 @ 21:59

    I read “tips” as lips, and took it as being about anticipation. OK, it’s about momentary denial then. Very true.

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  • Kris Feb 22, 2009 @ 19:53

    I like this one! Witty and colloquial, but pared down and vivid enough to make it poetry.

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