Swimming Dust | Sunlight haiku poem example | 012409

swimming dust
in the light that cracks
the window

Craig Peritz on Haiku Habits

This is a special guest post by my friend Craig Peritz. I haven’t seen him in 20 years, but we recently reconnected on Facebook.

7 comments… add one
  • Borut Jan 25, 2009 @ 5:04

    Dust particles meet:
    Coming across a Peric(tz) –
    My mom’s maiden name.

  • Devika Jan 25, 2009 @ 9:23

    Striking imagery, Ken

    wishes,
    devika

  • Ken Wagner Jan 25, 2009 @ 19:53

    Yes, very striking. Proud to publish it; wish I had written it!

  • gautami tripathy Jan 26, 2009 @ 10:23

    dusty haze-
    friends from past
    bring light

  • Devika Jan 26, 2009 @ 11:00

    Hi Ken,

    A response to Gautami’s comment. Can’t help but comment.

    A new moon night
    searching archives to see
    Old faces of some friends

    Its best left like that. But often faces of friends from the past are so hazy…fast changing features…. wished to see their old faces again…

    devika

  • Ken Wagner Jan 26, 2009 @ 19:33

    A great exchange of thoughts and poems about friendship. Thank you.

  • Devika Jan 26, 2009 @ 23:43

    thank you Ken 🙂

    devika

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