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  • Bluegrass Poet Feb 24, 2009 @ 9:34

    Nice rhyme in this one, not just the obvious “crunches/birches” but also “crunches/amongst.” I know rhyme isn’t what haiku is about, but I appreciate it occasionally.

  • Ken Wagner Feb 24, 2009 @ 21:17

    This is an interesting issue. People have commented a few times about my use of “half-rhymes”. I don’t try to rhyme (or not rhyme), but I do have a preference for certain rhythms and sounds. I guess if it happens naturally, it won’t feel forced in a haiku (or what I am calling haiku!).

    Thanks for the feedback.

  • devika Feb 24, 2009 @ 23:47

    Good one, again

    i saw a photo recently, and it looked lovely…

    wishes,
    devika

  • Ken Wagner Feb 25, 2009 @ 22:24

    Yes, I do love the elegance of birches, especially when surrounded by snow.

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