6 comments… add one
  • borut Feb 17, 2009 @ 3:27

    Sounds like a human being!?:)

  • Gabby Feb 17, 2009 @ 12:17

    This is brilliant. I like the idea of haikuhabits. I have been reading up on them over at http://www.haiku.com/Haiku and i hope i can create and publish haiku poems as well.

  • gautami tripathy Feb 17, 2009 @ 12:21

    Never thought of lungs that way!

  • Ken Wagner Feb 17, 2009 @ 21:23

    Gautami and Borut – Yes, old and worn lungs. Do you think the poem works?

    Gabby – Thanks for the visit and generous comment. There are some haiku sites listed on our Haiku on the Web page that you may wish to browse.

  • Deb Feb 17, 2009 @ 22:03

    I think it works incredibly well. Immediate, visceral.

  • Ken Wagner Feb 18, 2009 @ 19:37

    Many thanks, Deb!

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *