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  • MacJax Mar 4, 2009 @ 21:26

    Nicely done.

  • Kris Mar 5, 2009 @ 11:01

    Dear Ken,
    For me this one doesn’t quite work, because the connection between the two parts doesn’t click. Any other observation of natural beauty could go with “deadlines loom” (and often does, in my experience!) and the poem would be pretty much the same.
    What paticular moment of nature, or way of expressing that moment, makes the looming deadlines particularly vivid, or painful, or meaningless, or, now that we come down to it, not so important after all? 🙂

  • Tikkis Apr 12, 2009 @ 6:23

    Late spring —
    Summer’s dress rehearsal
    canceled

  • Natasha Smith Feb 9, 2011 @ 16:59

    ken, dont listen to the kris, your poem was amazingly written! It worked very well for me! I would love to read more poems that you have written. (:

  • heather Apr 12, 2011 @ 16:03

    Sad Snow turns to ice

    Snow on dead branches
    Quickly falls, loneliness comes
    Leaking crystal tears

  • heather Apr 12, 2011 @ 16:04

    your poem was great! it inspired me to write this:)

  • sarah Feb 3, 2012 @ 16:09

    I thought it was………AWESOME!!!!

  • NatashaG Apr 26, 2012 @ 22:45

    It has the wrong amount of syllables. It’s 5-7-5. Otherwise, it’s great!

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