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  • Kurt Aug 2, 2009 @ 15:27

    I like the concision of this, and the two images work well together, perhaps unexpectedly.

  • Ken Wagner Aug 4, 2009 @ 19:08

    Thanks for the feedback, Kurt. I was trying to play with various sensations: ice, the hard “k”sound in vodka and cut, and the slowed-down ending produced by “flowers.” Glad to find it unexpected!

  • rhonna Aug 7, 2009 @ 0:16

    give me and example of star poem

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