5 comments… add one
  • Ken Wagner Jan 5, 2009 @ 19:50

    Was –
    I chopped wood
    all day – Now the butterflies
    are gone.

  • gautami tripathy Jan 6, 2009 @ 7:45

    chopping wood
    all day long
    i missed the butterflies

    *grin*

    However syllables are gone, taking a hike!

  • Ken Wagner Jan 6, 2009 @ 21:06

    I like your version. Who needs haiku rules when on a lovely haiku hike??

  • Borut Jan 7, 2009 @ 2:20

    What to do with them,
    In this world of coarse matter –
    Ah, the butterflies!?

  • Ken Wagner Jan 7, 2009 @ 18:52

    The butterflies are not coarse, indeed. But what of the coarse things? I love them, too! Haiku is both coarse and not coarse.

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