Iced Vodka | Flowers haiku poem example | 080109 Categories: Haiku Poems About FlowersIced vodka, the fresh cut flowersKen Wagner on Haiku Habits
I like the concision of this, and the two images work well together, perhaps unexpectedly.
Thanks for the feedback, Kurt. I was trying to play with various sensations: ice, the hard “k”sound in vodka and cut, and the slowed-down ending produced by “flowers.” Glad to find it unexpected!
give me and example of star poem
Here you go – Street Stars. We aim to please!