His Coat | Animals haiku poem example | 010309 Categories: Haiku Poems About AnimalsHis coat is still winter thick – A bear sniffing berries.Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Perfect haiku to read for this chilly morning! Thanks…
shouldn’t he be hibernating? 😉
nice one
Yes, hibernating vs. berries!
I meant for this one to suggest the emergence of spring from winter. Perhaps adding “still” in the second line will make this clearer.
Was –
His coat
is winter thick – A bear
sniffing berries.
Ah, the coat! I kind of envy the bear!:)
The bear needs more than our envy! He needs to sniff his berries – in peace.
Peace, Brother Bear!:)
Yes, peace. And battle, too. A peaceful battle is best, still.