Dead Birds | Economics senryu poem example | 021109

Dead birds –
This Peruvian sweater
was cheap

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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Bluegrass Poet Feb 12, 2009 @ 10:46
Haiku for social commentary! I like it.
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Alison Feb 12, 2009 @ 17:09
I like this one! The imagery surprises….
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gautami tripathy Feb 12, 2009 @ 20:24
Well put!
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Ken Wagner Feb 12, 2009 @ 20:37
Bluegrass Poet – I hadn’t tried this before. The topics are endless!
Alison / Gautami – Thanks. I can never quite tell how others will respond. The mystery of poetry, I suppose.
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comrade harps Feb 12, 2009 @ 23:25
It took a moment, then Wham!
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haikuexpeditions Feb 13, 2009 @ 20:16
again this touches me…deeply. thanks!
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