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  • Bluegrass Poet Feb 12, 2009 @ 10:46

    Haiku for social commentary! I like it.

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  • Alison Feb 12, 2009 @ 17:09

    I like this one! The imagery surprises….

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  • gautami tripathy Feb 12, 2009 @ 20:24

    Well put!

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  • Ken Wagner Feb 12, 2009 @ 20:37

    Bluegrass Poet – I hadn’t tried this before. The topics are endless!

    Alison / Gautami – Thanks. I can never quite tell how others will respond. The mystery of poetry, I suppose.

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  • comrade harps Feb 12, 2009 @ 23:25

    It took a moment, then Wham!

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  • haikuexpeditions Feb 13, 2009 @ 20:16

    again this touches me…deeply. thanks!

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