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  • Adriaan Jan 1, 2009 @ 12:32

    Like it. But does “vacant lots” need to be plural?

  • Ken Wagner Jan 1, 2009 @ 22:23

    Yes, I think you are correct.

    Was –
    Cut trees
    in vacant lots
    drying out.

  • haikuexpeditions Feb 1, 2009 @ 22:14

    Beads of pain
    Stump now discolored
    …Last season’s trim

    Enjoy,
    S
    http://thehaikumoment.wordpress.com
    http://haikuexpeditions.com

  • Ken Wagner Feb 2, 2009 @ 20:26

    Yes, that is a nice follow-up poem. What happened to last year’s unused Christmas trees? Hopefully, they serve as winter shelter for small creatures.