Cut Trees | Trees haiku poem example | 122408 Categories: Haiku Poems About TreesCut trees in a vacant lot drying out.Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Like it. But does “vacant lots” need to be plural?
Yes, I think you are correct.
Was –
Cut trees
in vacant lots
drying out.
Beads of pain
Stump now discolored
…Last season’s trim
Enjoy,
S
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Yes, that is a nice follow-up poem. What happened to last year’s unused Christmas trees? Hopefully, they serve as winter shelter for small creatures.