Cold Sun | Sun haiku poem example | 010709

The cold sun
breaks through –
Sinus pain.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

7 comments… add one

gautami tripathy Jan 8, 2009 @ 10:07
I am enjoying this!
sinus pain-
resultant of
cooling sun
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Ken Wagner Jan 8, 2009 @ 20:28
You enjoy – sinus pain?!
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Borut Jan 9, 2009 @ 3:55
A break-through haiku!?:)
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gautami tripathy Jan 9, 2009 @ 4:44
No!
I am enjoying haikuing!
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Ken Wagner Jan 9, 2009 @ 15:27
Ah, haikuing. It is good to enjoy. It is good to haiku. Good!
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Dave Jan 10, 2009 @ 21:11
I agree with the others – this one’s pretty effective, Ken. Not sure I can tell you why…
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Ken Wagner Jan 11, 2009 @ 20:33
The efficacy of the inexplicable!
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