Cold Sun | Sun haiku poem example | 010709

Categories: Haiku Poems About The Sun

The cold sun
breaks through –
Sinus pain.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

7 comments… add one

gautami tripathy Jan 8, 2009 @ 10:07

I am enjoying this!

sinus pain-
resultant of
cooling sun

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Ken Wagner Jan 8, 2009 @ 20:28

You enjoy – sinus pain?!

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Borut Jan 9, 2009 @ 3:55

A break-through haiku!?:)

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gautami tripathy Jan 9, 2009 @ 4:44

No!

I am enjoying haikuing!

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Ken Wagner Jan 9, 2009 @ 15:27

Ah, haikuing. It is good to enjoy. It is good to haiku. Good!

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Dave Jan 10, 2009 @ 21:11

I agree with the others – this one’s pretty effective, Ken. Not sure I can tell you why…

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Ken Wagner Jan 11, 2009 @ 20:33

The efficacy of the inexplicable!

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