Chopped Wood | Nature haiku poem | 010509 Categories: Haiku Poems About NatureI chopped wood all day. I missed seeing the butterflies.Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Was –
I chopped wood
all day – Now the butterflies
are gone.
chopping wood
all day long
i missed the butterflies
*grin*
However syllables are gone, taking a hike!
I like your version. Who needs haiku rules when on a lovely haiku hike??
What to do with them,
In this world of coarse matter –
Ah, the butterflies!?
The butterflies are not coarse, indeed. But what of the coarse things? I love them, too! Haiku is both coarse and not coarse.