I Breathe | Breath senryu poem example | 112008 Categories: Favorite Poems, Senryu Poems About Human Nature Today I breathe; tomorrow I bellow. Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Wow! Like it!
It was almost an afterthought, which I guess is what you have been telling me. Capturing the birth of moment, just before it wisps away.
Of course you can’t know for sure today what you will do tomorrow, but apart from that it’s very nice.
In between, as Issa might comment:
Tub to tub
The whole journey
Just hub-bub!
– trans. Lewis Mackenzie